hey there...new to this tribe...and tribe.net in general. Greetings! here's a poem for ya...
the end is insight (title)
The journey may toss you
Pull you under
Throwing thoughts asunder,
Go with the current,
The whitewater moment,
Don ’t fight it —
Fearlessly ride
the river of fortune
Rolls
The fabric of reality
Is riddled
With holes
With no anticipation
Comes no hurry
No consequence or jury
i'm confident
My confidant,
can see clearly
And invite
(ex) sight-meant
shine wisdom with fury
…to participate, I must RSVP
before third eye goes blurry
make peace with the pieces
of how we all fit together
no dividing lines
or chains to sever,
emancipated union,
flawless communion
infinate forever
spirit college
open for admission
in your heart, the tuition
open your mind
to primordial wisdom
did I forget to mention?
You are realized intention
To which I aspire
reflect, refract, and inspire
duality be joined
juxta- is justa- position
short(en) the long(ing)
and annihilate desire
...step into my fire...
so I might bask in
your warm glow
fold space and connect
with your grace, bestow,
gatekeeper,
dissolve
distance,
step
through
the
looking-glass
mirror
into
ONE-derland
purpose ever more clear
dot your I's with hearts
and meet me here
ps: sorry about the repeats if you guys are members of some of the other writing tribes...just wanting to introduce myself to these tribes, and hopefully get feedback on my latest poem...
lotsa love,
lil 'L
the end is insight (title)
The journey may toss you
Pull you under
Throwing thoughts asunder,
Go with the current,
The whitewater moment,
Don ’t fight it —
Fearlessly ride
the river of fortune
Rolls
The fabric of reality
Is riddled
With holes
With no anticipation
Comes no hurry
No consequence or jury
i'm confident
My confidant,
can see clearly
And invite
(ex) sight-meant
shine wisdom with fury
…to participate, I must RSVP
before third eye goes blurry
make peace with the pieces
of how we all fit together
no dividing lines
or chains to sever,
emancipated union,
flawless communion
infinate forever
spirit college
open for admission
in your heart, the tuition
open your mind
to primordial wisdom
did I forget to mention?
You are realized intention
To which I aspire
reflect, refract, and inspire
duality be joined
juxta- is justa- position
short(en) the long(ing)
and annihilate desire
...step into my fire...
so I might bask in
your warm glow
fold space and connect
with your grace, bestow,
gatekeeper,
dissolve
distance,
step
through
the
looking-glass
mirror
into
ONE-derland
purpose ever more clear
dot your I's with hearts
and meet me here
ps: sorry about the repeats if you guys are members of some of the other writing tribes...just wanting to introduce myself to these tribes, and hopefully get feedback on my latest poem...
lotsa love,
lil 'L
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Re: the end is insight
Sat, April 10, 2004 - 9:35 PMvery good peom Laurel. i like it very much and it is so true too
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Re: the end is insight
Wed, April 27, 2005 - 7:24 PMI love the way you weave the continuities throughout your poem and the way you play with words.
The title alone is worth the price of admission!
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Re: the end is insight
Sun, September 25, 2005 - 11:05 PMI'm getting ready for bed, Its geting late for me at 77 years old. I like your poem. I envy those that have this ability. Don't ever stop.
Bob Cochran aka Corky Cochran